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« on: October 10, 2009, 08:27:02 AM » |
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I am currently writing the script for a movie that will be the best movie ever to be made by TriJourney Studios. I'll post the script up soon. I'm planning on starting filming when school ends and summer comes.
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"Half of the entire air vehicle was hit with a colossal force that ripped it apart. The metal twisted and sheared in an ear-breaking squeal, lighting on fire and then exploding in what would have been the most magnificent fireworks grand finale ever created. The other half of the vehicle spun slowly through the air, plummeting down to the ground, smashing into the ground in a grand explosion."
- Black Hole Magic
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« Reply #1 on: October 10, 2009, 09:46:14 AM » |
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what's it about?
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Jeremiah Pena
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« Reply #2 on: October 10, 2009, 10:56:07 AM » |
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It's about alien creatures (not very smart ones), that are similar to lizards, that start landing in this neighborhood, and one lands in a kid's backyard, so he calls his friend over, and they start to fight it, and then the things start landing all over in the neighborhood, and they have to fight them and kill them all. (They die easily if hit in the eye)
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"Half of the entire air vehicle was hit with a colossal force that ripped it apart. The metal twisted and sheared in an ear-breaking squeal, lighting on fire and then exploding in what would have been the most magnificent fireworks grand finale ever created. The other half of the vehicle spun slowly through the air, plummeting down to the ground, smashing into the ground in a grand explosion."
- Black Hole Magic
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« Reply #3 on: October 10, 2009, 02:54:09 PM » |
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um... you're kidding, right?
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I am the most awesome videogame character EVER, with the possible exception of Ganondorf, Link or Samus Aran.
By the way:
Yoshi on a Motorcycle = EPITOME OF AWESOME
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Jeremiah Pena
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« Reply #4 on: October 10, 2009, 08:21:43 PM » |
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Ok. Here's the script as far as it is written (I only have about half done). It's attached.
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"Half of the entire air vehicle was hit with a colossal force that ripped it apart. The metal twisted and sheared in an ear-breaking squeal, lighting on fire and then exploding in what would have been the most magnificent fireworks grand finale ever created. The other half of the vehicle spun slowly through the air, plummeting down to the ground, smashing into the ground in a grand explosion."
- Black Hole Magic
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« Reply #5 on: October 10, 2009, 10:00:59 PM » |
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I just got an erroe message. post it in a post, I don't care if it hurts my eyes
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I am the most awesome videogame character EVER, with the possible exception of Ganondorf, Link or Samus Aran.
By the way:
Yoshi on a Motorcycle = EPITOME OF AWESOME
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Jeremiah Pena
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« Reply #6 on: October 23, 2009, 07:48:51 PM » |
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Here's the script as far as it is currently written:
EXT. OUTSIDE HOUSE - DAY
STEVE is riding his scooter down the sidewalk towards his house, coming home from school.
He drops his scooter down and walks up the driveway to the front door. He sees a note on the front door. It reads: "Going to barbecue with kids. Won't be back till 8."
STEVE opens the door and enters the house. In the background, a bright object starts falling from the sky, getting closer to the house.
INT. Inside house - Day
STEVE closes the door behind him after walking into the house, and drops his backpack on the floor.
He starts walking toward the kitchen when a loud explosion shakes the ground.
STEVE
(Surprise)
What the...?
STEVE runs to the back door, and looks out to see a smoke cloud in his backyard. He pulls open the screen door and stares out for a couple of seconds.
He hurries and grabs a (pink cell phone) phone and quickly dials the number to ANDREW.
STEVE
(Into Phone, while looking at the smoke cloud)
Andrew?
ANDREW
(Heard through phone)
Hi Steve.
STEVE tentatively walks out onto the porch in the backyard, still staring at the smoke.
STEVE
You won't believe what just happened.
ANDREW
Did the principal actually quit!
ANDREW is sitting at his desk, doing homework.
STEVE
No. Something crashed in my backyard.
ANDREW
Like what?
STEVE
I don't know! Just come over here, fast!
ANDREW
Ok. Be there in a second.
STEVE walks closer to the smoke cloud, which is dissipating. There is a dog sized lump sitting on the ground, obscured by smoke.
Suddenly, a small explosion occurs, and STEVE jumps back against the house.
EXT. OUTSIDE HOUSE - DAY
ANDREW is walking to STEVE's house.
He rings the doorbell, and STEVE answers almost immediately.
STEVE
Come to the back.
They both go to the backyard, where there is no more smoke cloud or object. The yard looks perfectly normal.
STEVE
(Bewilderment)
What...?
ANDREW
Steve, there's nothing there.
STEVE
There... There was. A bunch of smoke, and...
ANDREW
Come on. Let's go do something on the computer or something.
STEVE takes one last look out before following ANDREW back into the house, leaving the screen door open.
As they walk away, we slowly zoom in on the bottom corner of the screen door. Suddenly, a scaly leg emerges from outside.
INT. INSIDE HOUSE - DAY
STEVE and ANDREW are sitting at the computer playing a game. Behind them, the CREATURE moves quickly into a different room.
ANDREW is playing the game.
STEVE
Come on, you're almost there.
An explosion happens in the other room. Smoke pours out from the hallway. ANDREW tips his chair over in surprise. They spring up and run to see what happened.
They walk into the other room, which is filled with smoke, and a small fire. Broken glass is scattered on the floor, and furniture is tipped over.
Something moves in the smoke, and then starts coming towards them.
ANDREW
(Terror)
What is that?
STEVE
(Terror)
Run!
They both start running, as the CREATURE comes faster. They run upstairs and hide in the baby room. STEVE and ANDREW huddle in the corner, terrified.
ANDREW
What is that thing?
STEVE
All I know is that it's some sort of creatures, and it's good at blowing stuff up!
The sound of another explosion occurs, and they jump. The sound of the CREATURE breathing and foot steps starts getting louder.
STEVE
We're going to die.
ANDREW jumps up and grabs 2 heavy plastic animal toys, and tosses one to STEVE.
ANDREW
When it comes, we hit it with these and run!
STEVE
We're going to die.
The sound of the CREATURE breathing gets louder.
Camera from CREATURE's point of view. Looks around corner to see ANDREW and STEVE huddling at the back of the room in terror. STEVE throws the toy at the creature (toward camera).
The CREATURE lets out a squeal of pain. ANDREW and STEVE sprint around it, just as it creates an explosion. The explosion knocks them down on the floor.
They jump up and run into a different room, and STEVE grabs an airsoft gun. He runs back into the hall, and fires at the CREATURE twice. The CREATURE squeals again, and STEVE runs back into the room. Another explosion occurs in the hall.
STEVE
I think I hurt it.
The CREATURE growls.
ANDREW
You didn't hurt it bad enough!
STEVE
Shhh.
The sound of the CREATURE breathing gets louder, and then the CREATURE runs past the doorway. ANDREW creeps up to the doorway, peers out, sees nothing, and closes the door to the room, locking it.
ANDREW
That thing is going to kill us.
STEVE
Yeah.
ANDREW
But not if we kill it first!
STEVE
How do we kill it? It's like an alien monster thing! Probably 10 times smarter than us!
ANDREW
It doesn't seem that smart to me.
STEVE
Still, there's no way we could kill it! I mean, it's blowing everything up! It blew up the couch! Uhg... Mom's going to kill me.
The sound of a distant explosion comes from outside, by the window.
ANDREW
What was that?
ANDREW hurries to the window and opens it, looking outside. He sees a smoke cloud in a neighbor's backyard.
STEVE runs up beside ANDREW.
STEVE
That's what happened in my backyard!
ANDREW
Oh no. Another one.
STEVE
That's MR. JOHNSON's house!
ANDREW
We've got to warn him! Do you have a phone?
STEVE pulls out a pink phone from his pocket and holds it out to ANDREW.
ANDREW
Pink?
STEVE
It's the family phone.
ANDREW dials MR. JOHNSON's number. He puts the phone on speaker.
MR. JOHNSON
Hello?
STEVE
Mr. Johnson! There's a monster thing that's in your backyard!
MR. JOHNSON
Excuse me? What? Who is this?
STEVE
Steve Burningham!
ANDREW
An alien thing is in your backyard!
MR. JOHNSON
What are you two prank calling...
The sound of glass breaking comes through the phone.
MR. JOHNSON
What the!
The sound of an explosion comes through the phone.
STEVE
Mr. Johnson!
MR. JOHNSON
Ahh. Who's blowing stuff up! No one blows up things in my house!
The sound of a CREATURE growling comes through the phone.
MR. JOHNSON
What? What is that?
STEVE
Mr. Johnson!
MR. JOHNSON
This is what my shotgun's for!
A sound like a dropped phone comes through the phone.
ANDREW
He's going to use a shotgun on it...
The sound of a gun firing comes through the phone. A squeal comes through. The hear growling come through.
MR. JOHNSON
(Faintly)
No! No! Aah!
MR. JOHNSON suddenly stops yelling.
ANDREW drops the phone.
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"Half of the entire air vehicle was hit with a colossal force that ripped it apart. The metal twisted and sheared in an ear-breaking squeal, lighting on fire and then exploding in what would have been the most magnificent fireworks grand finale ever created. The other half of the vehicle spun slowly through the air, plummeting down to the ground, smashing into the ground in a grand explosion."
- Black Hole Magic
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« Reply #7 on: November 14, 2009, 03:06:53 PM » |
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interesting.
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I am the most awesome videogame character EVER, with the possible exception of Ganondorf, Link or Samus Aran.
By the way:
Yoshi on a Motorcycle = EPITOME OF AWESOME
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« Reply #8 on: January 15, 2010, 11:02:22 AM » |
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You might want to say "someone's vandilizeing my house!" instead of "bnoone blows stuff up in my house" That's the only that really junped out at me, besides the increadible weirdness of the whole situation...and least these aliens don't eat people and do all sorts of other unoriginal things...  |
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Shadow Ninja
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« Reply #9 on: January 16, 2010, 01:09:35 PM » |
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The project is dead. It is no longer in progress. Instead he created Key Box. I don't know if thats dead put Trijourney Is also working on 1 other projects. Called Dark Troubles. The role play is being redone into a film.
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« Last Edit: January 16, 2010, 06:03:50 PM by Shadow Ninja »
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« Reply #10 on: February 27, 2010, 11:43:32 PM » |
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why did the project die? it looked cool.
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I am the most awesome videogame character EVER, with the possible exception of Ganondorf, Link or Samus Aran.
By the way:
Yoshi on a Motorcycle = EPITOME OF AWESOME
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Yoshi on a Motorcycle
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« Reply #11 on: March 01, 2010, 03:55:26 PM » |
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It's death saddens me.
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I am the most awesome videogame character EVER, with the possible exception of Ganondorf, Link or Samus Aran.
By the way:
Yoshi on a Motorcycle = EPITOME OF AWESOME
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Jeremiah Pena
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« Reply #12 on: March 01, 2010, 05:51:17 PM » |
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I have a better script idea. Much better. And we're working on making Assassin 2 and 3.
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"Half of the entire air vehicle was hit with a colossal force that ripped it apart. The metal twisted and sheared in an ear-breaking squeal, lighting on fire and then exploding in what would have been the most magnificent fireworks grand finale ever created. The other half of the vehicle spun slowly through the air, plummeting down to the ground, smashing into the ground in a grand explosion."
- Black Hole Magic
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Yoshi on a Motorcycle
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« Reply #13 on: March 02, 2010, 10:04:55 PM » |
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Ah.
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I am the most awesome videogame character EVER, with the possible exception of Ganondorf, Link or Samus Aran.
By the way:
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