Comments on: Overtaken http://jeremiahpena.com/site/2010/01/overtaken/ Indie Composer Wed, 23 Jun 2010 22:42:46 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Beyond the Window | Jeremiah Pena http://jeremiahpena.com/site/2010/01/overtaken/comment-page-1/#comment-196 Beyond the Window | Jeremiah Pena Tue, 12 Jan 2010 16:49:41 +0000 http://jeremiahpena.com/site/?p=127#comment-196 [...] reaction to Overtaken, was generally that they really liked it, but found it much too short. I thought it was too short [...] [...] reaction to Overtaken, was generally that they really liked it, but found it much too short. I thought it was too short [...]

]]> By: PawnStar http://jeremiahpena.com/site/2010/01/overtaken/comment-page-1/#comment-194 PawnStar Mon, 11 Jan 2010 13:10:42 +0000 http://jeremiahpena.com/site/?p=127#comment-194 Wow. Very nice. I love how you feature a soloist, it adds somewhat more of a memorance to it. Wow. Very nice. I love how you feature a soloist, it adds somewhat more of a memorance to it.

]]> By: Ryan http://jeremiahpena.com/site/2010/01/overtaken/comment-page-1/#comment-191 Ryan Sat, 09 Jan 2010 17:29:49 +0000 http://jeremiahpena.com/site/?p=127#comment-191 Nice poem. It kind of fits the song as well. That would be funny to make the song with these words. It fit well. Nice poem. It kind of fits the song as well. That would be funny to make the song with these words. It fit well.

]]> By: Jarom Norris http://jeremiahpena.com/site/2010/01/overtaken/comment-page-1/#comment-186 Jarom Norris Sat, 09 Jan 2010 04:56:24 +0000 http://jeremiahpena.com/site/?p=127#comment-186 WOW. This song... it fills me with emotion... I have no idea what it is, but I feel it so strong, I'm almost crying... I wrote a poem for it. I thought I'd post it here. What is this? What is it's meaning? This tragedy that fills my soul The despair that comes over me. Strength seems to be fleeing But I need every ounce that I have I must fight this battle But only more tragedy lies ahead. Why does this so overcome me? Why is the emotion so deep? Like a hole, never ending A sad note echoing still. The anguish! The anguish! It fills me! Though I ride into battle head high. The tragedy, tragedy, kills me! Before the enemy raises his sword! The sad note, the tragedy, echoes... That note plays to my dying breath... WOW. This song… it fills me with emotion… I have no idea what it is, but I feel it so strong, I’m almost crying…

I wrote a poem for it. I thought I’d post it here.

What is this?
What is it’s meaning?
This tragedy that fills my soul
The despair that comes over me.
Strength seems to be fleeing
But I need every ounce that I have
I must fight this battle
But only more tragedy lies ahead.
Why does this so overcome me?
Why is the emotion so deep?
Like a hole, never ending
A sad note echoing still.
The anguish! The anguish! It fills me!
Though I ride into battle head high.
The tragedy, tragedy, kills me!
Before the enemy raises his sword!
The sad note, the tragedy, echoes…
That note plays to my dying breath…

]]> By: Ryan http://jeremiahpena.com/site/2010/01/overtaken/comment-page-1/#comment-184 Ryan Fri, 08 Jan 2010 22:45:10 +0000 http://jeremiahpena.com/site/?p=127#comment-184 Its a nice song. I love it. It starts good and gets breaks out into the Action sort of part. Ending with good part that makes it rich. Very well put together. Its a nice song. I love it. It starts good and gets breaks out into the Action sort of part. Ending with good part that makes it rich. Very well put together.

]]> By: Garrett the Dragon http://jeremiahpena.com/site/2010/01/overtaken/comment-page-1/#comment-183 Garrett the Dragon Fri, 08 Jan 2010 22:37:21 +0000 http://jeremiahpena.com/site/?p=127#comment-183 I like it. It's really well done. Hope more songs can compare to this. I like it. It’s really well done. Hope more songs can compare to this.

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